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Songwriting Tips: Seven Easy Steps to Write Hit Lyrics

  
  
  
  

by Molly-Ann Leikin, Songwriting Consultant


How To Write A Hit Song

I've written poems and I've written lyrics. I've learned if you can do one, you can usually do the other. As a poet, I've enjoyed the pure creative process, and the occasional publication of my work.

But I've never made a dime writing a poem. Ever.

On the other hand, I live very comfortably on my lyric royalties. And it beats working.

In my practice as a songwriting consultant in California, I hear almost every other new client tell me he or she can't write lyrics. To help them, I've developed a seven-step system, and it works.

If you're a poet who's tired of being broke, and would like to occasionally use your gifts to write more commercially, this article can help you make that transition. It can also help lyricists who are stuck, composers who claim they write music only, plus the entire world of left-brain computer types who ache to create something romantic—like a song.

When writing one, be aware that melodies are open to interpretation - so when you write a tune, what you feel or intend is still safe in your heart.You don't have to reveal yourself or stand completely naked in front of the world. But once you put words to a tune, your feelings are totally out in the open and everyone knows what's in your heart. Therefore, it can be very inhibiting to write lyrics, which is often why writers get stuck.

But here is the process I use with my clients to make lyric writing simple. I suggest you use all seven steps. Cutting corners is usually why a lyric doesn't work.

Most poets and beginning songwriters make the mistake of writing acres of lines of iambic pentameter and then set out to look for someone who can turn that dreary rhythm into an exciting melody. Almost nobody can, no matter what the words are saying. So don't write your lyrics first. ]Get the tune, then write the words. So let's assume, for this exercise, that you have a melody but no idea of what to say in your lyric. Don't worry if you don't have a tune. I'll give you one.

STEP 1. Sing or play the tune of a nursery rhyme. Any of them will do: Baa Baa Black Sheep, Humpty Dumpty, Ring Around the Rosie - it doesn't matter which you choose. Use this melody for practice. As you listen to it, scribble down some non-rhyming prose. Ignore the exact notes, but listen to the feelings. Let your words be a stream-of-conscious exercise to warm up your imagination. Don't use rhymes or logic. Try to be visual, silly, playful and have fun with it.
Here's an example of some lines I scribbled down after listening to "Itsy Bitsy Spider":

A former tooth farmer from Fluffy, South Apricot, dug through Exxon's banana shoe hairbrush section for kangaroo lingerie, after the De La Hoya/Pope Potato wrist rake from Western Tire Cough Drops slid unnoticed into burping toenails.

STEP 2. Now please write a silly, visual non-rhyming lyric to your tune. Match each note with one syllable. Fill your non-rhyming lyric with ridiculous pictures. Again, don't be logical, don't make it make sense. Every line can be about something different. The first might concern shoe repair, the second, airport parking. In this draft, try to keep all the rhymes OUT. Here's an example of a nonsense lyric I wrote, to the tune of "Jack and Jill".
Lizards frying Jaguars
All hum Hawaiin shoe trees
Disneyland will hiccup in
The mayor's purple phone soup.

STEP 3. Now write an uncensored list of silly titles that will fit with the stresses of the first line of your nursery rhyme. No matter how many notes in that line, keep your title to seven syllables or less. Shoot for twenty or thirty possible titles. Don't write anything you've heard before. Let your imagination roll. Don't say, "Oh, that's dumb." Write it all down. You might find one of these nonsense titles could actually turn into a real one later. "I Love You" is fine, but Jewel's "Swallow The Moon" gets you in the gut. A good title will write the whole song for you. A mediocre one will leave you stranded in line two.
Here are some nonsense titles I wrote to the tune of
"Jack and Jill":

Santa knit a Hershey Bar
Orange dancing astronauts
Drinking bricks can make you skate

STEP 4. Write a few real titles with the same number of syllables as your silly ones. Here are some I wrote to
"Jack and Jill":
Sundays with the London Times
Do you ever think of me
Moonlight over Lake O'Hare

STEP 5. Choose one of your real titles. Write the story it tells in prose. Just a couple of sentences will do fine. Writing the story as a letter might be easier for you. If any lines come out rhyming, change them so they don't. That way, you'll be able to express yourself with complete freedom, and without the constraints of rhyme or meter.
When you finish this step, you'll know the beginning, middle and end of your story before you start to write the lyric. Most songs have two verses, a chorus and a bridge, so allow space for them in your story. By writing it first, you'll be able to see if you have enough information to fill a whole song, so you won't get stuck half-way through with nowhere to go. You can always cut out words and lines later.

STEP 6. Using the information from your story, write a non-rhyming lyric to the nursery rhyme melody you've chosen. Should rhymes mysteriously appear, delete them.

STEP 7. Now write the "real" lyric, with the story and the rhymes.


I suggest you do all seven steps. Not four, not two. Seven. My clients who don't are still claiming they can't write lyrics. But many of my songwriters who do are climbing the charts.
The more lyrics you write, the easier it gets. So please do this exercise five times, each with a different nursery rhyme. Once you learn how to map out a lyric, and write it to a melody, you're 90% there.
© 2010 Molly-Ann Leikin
www.songmd.com
Molly-Ann Leikin (rhymes with bacon) is a songwriting consultant with dozens of gold and platinum records plus an Emmy nomination.  The author of “How To Write A Hit Song, Fifth Edition” and “How To Be A Hit Songwriter”, and the producer of “Molly-Ann Leikin’s Master Class in Songwriting”, Molly consults with talented writers and artists all over the world, with a view to helping them market their material.  She also matches lyricists with composers.  And she’s very good at it.  Three of her clients have Grammy nominations, another won an Emmy, and so far, 5067 others, with Molly’s help, have placed their work in movies, on TV, CD’s and in commercials.

Her website is www.songmd.com.  You can reach her at songmd@songmd.com.  If you live in the USA or Canada, you can call her toll-free at 800-851-6588.  For more information on the USA Songwriting Competition, please go to: http://www.songwriting.net

Comments

Despite what Quincy might believe, this is not a waste of time. Anytime you are writing lyrics, you are doing something of value, even if you have no intention of ever using them. 
 
 
 
If you are an experienced lyricist, you probably don't need this exercise, but if you are having trouble, try this. It shouldn't take more than an hour, and you have nothing to lose by trying.
Posted @ Tuesday, March 30, 2010 2:52 PM by JJ Biener
This is good advice, pls. get in contact with me, I could use someone like you. 
BR Lotte
Posted @ Wednesday, March 31, 2010 3:38 AM by lotte Aagaard
my 9 year old daughter wrote a song recently. she was humming her tune in the shower and jumped out when she realized she had a song. my other three children have been singing this song to themselves constantly. what do i do with her song?
Posted @ Saturday, April 10, 2010 7:50 AM by christine
Christine, I suggest you exploit her mercilessly. Record the song with a lot of extra musicians, give your other kids small parts so they are part of the band, dress them all up in sexy/naughty little outfits and make a video, then sell it to the Disney Channel. Good luck, and send me 10% if you hit it big.
Posted @ Tuesday, April 20, 2010 9:57 PM by John
I really think music making should be harder; if evryone can do it, then making music is not speial any more.
Posted @ Wednesday, April 21, 2010 10:40 PM by Toxic Avenger
Very good. Gives me a new angle to work from. I love the random lyrics that come out of it.
Posted @ Monday, April 26, 2010 1:09 PM by Kylé Adcock
Well I've been writing lyrics since I was 11, poetry and stories before then and you're right about the link between the melody and the lyrics. Too true - people don't get that half the story is in the melody. I'm finding it hard to even start your excersize though, because I'm so used to taking my lyrics seriously that I can't be that wacky. When I started the article I thought you might actually be an idiot for the kind of things you were coming up with, but by the end of it I realised it's like voice training(I'm a voice trainer) - the stupider the ecersize makes you feel, the more you're accessing the right mindframe. 
 
My problem is this, because I've been writing for so long, I feel like I've run out of unused words - I find distinct theme-words in my music through the years. It appears that I have a pull towars words like fire, burn, why, love, fear, free etc. all the time, and even though I've found many different ways of expressing the same words and concepts, they either sound too 'intelligent' or 'snobby' to give the song the freeflowing aspect I need, or they just sound dumb. What do you do when you have atleast 5 songs for every word that ever mattered to you, and you can't really just keep doing that because if 3 different people buy them, they will think you sold them all on the same catch. Not that they sound the same, it's just that the same power words keep coming up in the same places.
Posted @ Friday, May 14, 2010 2:19 PM by Marike
i literally have the book and it is right here next to me!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted @ Saturday, May 15, 2010 7:23 PM by jasa
What? 
Posted @ Monday, May 17, 2010 6:54 AM by Marike
Hello I wrote a song about Michael Jackson a day after his death, but I have the melody in my head 5 months before his death I couldn't get the lyric down untill I heard that Michael had pass away and it can to me just like that I'm a big fan of his and always will be. The name of the song is call( Good bye Michael) Good by Michael, good Mr. Jackson. 
 
 
 
You will be surely missed with out a doubt we will remember all your hits. 
 
 
 
Posted @ Wednesday, June 09, 2010 1:30 AM by edgar
I'm a published lyricist and songwriter, which means I do melodies and words myself. I've had songs recorded and they received radio airplay. I believe I may be able to write a song about anything, anytime and make it sound like a Top 40 tune. My question is this: Where the heck do you go to make money as a lyricist or even a songwriter? I've never made a dime myself, despite critical acclaim the singer/artist received.  
How do I pitch myself as a lyricist? 
Wayne
Posted @ Wednesday, June 23, 2010 4:23 PM by Wayne Collins
hey can u write me a song PLEASE!! You see im going to Nashville and am going to record a song.
Posted @ Monday, July 12, 2010 3:30 PM by Tifani
Hi Tifani! I only saw your post now! Have you already left for Nashville? If you haven't yet - find me on facebook under Marike Els (Miki Vox) so we can get cracking on what exactly you need and so that I can record it straight away. :)
Posted @ Thursday, August 12, 2010 11:33 AM by Marike
Hi,i have a real passion for writting songs im in the prossess of putting one together, some time it takes a while cause i can't always find the right words for it and other times it just flows out and sounds really good. i would like to send you some lyrics to see what your thoughts are?
Posted @ Thursday, September 09, 2010 8:39 PM by Peter
THIS has changed MY WHOLE outlook on songwriting. I have always done lyrics first, and because of that my songs all have that same "feel" or "sound". I just went thru the seven steps and wrote a song with a TOTALLY new sound. THANK YOU!!! 
 
Posted @ Thursday, January 27, 2011 8:06 AM by Misha
I'm so pleased you are finding my input helpful. It's very gratifying. All of my consulting work has one goal - helping songwriters/artists become successful. I'd be happy to be part of your success team, too. Visit me atwww.songmd.com to find out how we can set that up.
Posted @ Sunday, February 27, 2011 12:16 PM by Molly-Ann Leikin
I have almost always came up with a melody first and then let the song tell me what fits. I would start to hum along to find how it would be sung then start writing. Not very often is it a finsihed product the first sitting. When I do write lyrics first...they collect dust. Occasionally I will get an idea from them but for the most aprt they are never used.
Posted @ Thursday, March 03, 2011 4:40 PM by dotfrog
Love your tips!
Posted @ Wednesday, March 23, 2011 6:43 PM by Cathie Phillips
I love this
Posted @ Tuesday, April 05, 2011 8:03 PM by Esperanza Cintra
Can I have your opinion ? Is the instrumentation of a song also the melody of a song i.e "if you recieved the backing track and lyrics to john lennons song Imagine "without ever hearing anyone singing it", do you think a songwriter would end up writing it as it can be heard today? or could hundreds of completely different songs be composed from that backing instrumentation? 
 
Thanks for your time, 
Eamon.
Posted @ Thursday, April 28, 2011 1:18 PM by Eamon Ireland
i just got both mollie's books and man, awesome! y'gotta read em.
Posted @ Tuesday, June 14, 2011 11:32 AM by Chuck Fiers
Hello Molly-Ann; 
I enjoyed your seven-step article it's fresh I've been writing over 25 years joined N.S.A.I. and the Tn.S.A.I. I've been slow to pitch but I write because I don't have a choice I own 87 copyrights and write EVERYDAY just like I'm making a killing at it please tell everyone with the dream to PLEASE learn to play an instrument no one can put the melody down like the author of the song and as Calvin Coolidge once said "Nothing can take the place of persistance, talent will not for nothing is more common than unsuccessful men [or women] with talent 
holler back your song friend 
Jimmie "Rabbit" Harris
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